ryan, once again your writing has left me speachless. i applaud you.
Teh songzorz
Run, run away.
This world is just an enemy.
Save your children, keep them away.
Lest they see your enemy you fear so well.
Can't have them know what creates life, can't have them know that it goes away.
Shelter
Shelter
Stay in your shelter
Keep away from this battlefield
This -*test*-('")
This calling
The whole reason you're here
Keep away
Keep them away
For the children we filter reality
For the children we forget it exists
Run away, stay away, fear the enemy
Never think, never learn, never fight
Shelter
Shelter
There is no real world
Shelter
Shelter
There is no death
Keep away
Keep away
Stay away
You fatten them up for the slaughter
Don't let them know about this war
Lock them in their shelter
...So yeah, thats it.
It's basically just bashing parents who shelter their children and don't let them know about all the evil in the world.
its a good point for a song...
| QUOTE (jackskellington2 @ Sep 9 2005, 07:59 PM) |
| thank you... |
u make my stuff look bad punk
lol
I don't write well unless I'm sad, mad or intensely happy. If I happen to be in a "ehhh" mood, my writing is oh so very bland, like vanilla ice cream.
| QUOTE (asylumchoir @ Sep 11 2005, 01:52 AM) |
| QUOTE (jackskellington2 @ Sep 9 2005, 07:59 PM) | | thank you... |
u make my stuff look bad punk
lol
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no, you mkae me scared to post mine
I just wanted to post some of my artwork... not really the place for it... but whatever.
Trees are just about my favorite thing to draw.
Sculpter... those are casts of my feet. Symbolizes balance.
Block Oil Painting
Lastly... the abstract town. "Phoenix Takever"
| QUOTE (jackskellington2 @ Sep 10 2005, 12:10 AM) |
Beaten down by the way, I don’t feel I’m anything
Suppressed by the ay you never notice me
Do you even see my crying?
Do you even see my bleeding?
Do you even see my dying?
[Chores]
You’ve broken my heart for the last time
Love, you’re no longer a friend of mine
Im leaving, because you crossed the line
Everybody you were with was nicer than me, better than me
You held there hands everyday
Dying every time you looked away
[Chores]
You’ve broken my heart for the last time
Love, you’re no longer a friend of mine
Im leaving, because you crossed the line
It never mattered who I was with
My heart went back to you
My wings flew me back to you
My eyes always turned back to you
[Chores]
You’ve broken my heart for the last time
Love, you’re no longer a friend of mine
Im leaving, because you crossed the line
My arms where always open
Never closed
My mind always intertwined with thoughts of you
But you never even acknowledge me
Never even felt my presence
All the make up
All the black cloths
My painted face
Just because im afraid you will never love me
You’re not even with me in my dreams |
that was on your xanga!
lovely!
shadow
what is this that i feel, so sureal like a dream,
my eyes grow dark as the light escapes them,
eclisped by the darkness that grows around me
my shadow is cast to reflect and effect my mind
as it binds me to stare back as it gazes at me
with the same hollow eyes, i go black,
im powerless to defend my secrets
that hides in my soul as i try to hold on
but this fear convinced me to let go,
such pain as this rush leaves me.
old scars brust open in my flesh
as the stress brings me to my knees
as i plea for help....
i cant believe that this can happen to me.
should i surrender to my own fate?
as i see no hope of escape
from this torment, i cover my face
try to earse this expression of pain
try to regain my control, grab ahold of my life.
If there is a shadow then there is a light,
i just have to fight n find it...
hah im not a evil person i jus find it easy to relate to these like that^^
i have lovey poems too..ill post em later =D
this is a pic of a awesome dragon i saw in a book. i jus had to draw it!
watcha think?
| QUOTE (d3m0ng1rl @ Sep 11 2005, 04:44 PM) |
[picture]
this is a pic of a awesome dragon i saw in a book. i jus had to draw it!
watcha think? |
That is amazing.
Just lovely.
At first I thought the wing was mountains which made it look ever cooler.. because it almost created a story behind it... blah blah blah the dragon lives in deserted hills...
| QUOTE (sphynxeyes @ Sep 11 2005, 05:42 PM) |
| QUOTE (d3m0ng1rl @ Sep 11 2005, 04:44 PM) | [picture]
this is a pic of a awesome dragon i saw in a book. i jus had to draw it!
watcha think? |
That is amazing.
Just lovely.
At first I thought the wing was mountains which made it look ever cooler.. because it almost created a story behind it... blah blah blah the dragon lives in deserted hills...
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hah yea i noticed that too
but like the dragon got damaged so the wings look funky hah